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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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A thing about the tweening-you have really great easing which shows the force of the object ie. the part where the items were being crushed, and you also put emphasis on the force by adding a slight camera shake when the smasher-thing slammed down. I was also very impressed by the attention to detail on the first apparatus. The little gears turning and extra hydraulics make the whole thing all the more brilliant!
over all, a great work of animation!
There is a lot of dynamism in the animation. I like how most of the movement is at the front where you want it, but you still have tiny bits of moving parts in the background. The background is moving in the just the right amount not to be overwhelming.
In addition to the general motion of the conveyor (the parts moving forward, up and down), you added another dimension of movement by zooming in and out. It makes it feel like we are part of the action too. We are getting closer to get a better view.
This is a very complex animation, it has a lot of small details but yet you managed to keep it simple and uncluttered. This is due to the black and white scheme, the uncluttered background and mostly to the illustrative style which is perfect, detailed yet simple.
I really cannot find any ways in which you could improve this animation. Maybe by adding music to it.
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